Of bright blue days streaked
With the vernacular of a slut
Or the beginning of hunger
In a big faceless gut,
Is to slump home un-smiling,
A definite discipline while
The carbon monoxide of a teenager
Is the most tempting substance
To harden the average ranger,
And such tempting tasks
Asks my structure to bone
I moan and groan,
I still don’t know –
I still don’t know if I want to know.
**Wrote this in about 15 minutes from top of my head and haven't edited it or anything. It's how it looks on the page were I wrote it. I don't know if I want to change it.. don't know if I like it.
2 comments:
I like the last line the best. Very nice.
Well, I would definitely keep the first 4 lines. They are stunning, dense, with a musical meter.
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